17 July 2023

Limit Break: Episode 1 Bizarre Meeting, Bizarre Day

 

Mysterious Motherly Voice: You are Atma.

ERROR!

Mysterious Motherly Voice: Remember, help those who can’t help themselves.

ERROR!

ERROR!

Mysterious Motherly Voice: I love you, my son.

ERROR!

ERROR!

ERROR!

Atma: Huh?!

A black-haired boy suddenly woke up from…whatever that is.

Atma: What the heck? Huh?

Just then, the boy realizes his current situation. In that he’s lying on the ground, leaving a human sized indent. Beside him is a river.  A rather beautiful river by that, with the sun sparkling in the water.

Atma: Woah…so pretty…what is this pretty place? Where am I?

He observed his surroundings and noticed a nearby rusted abandoned illegible sign. The words Atma could make out is “Park”

Atma: Dang. That thing doesn’t look pretty at all. Wonder what’s a Pak? How did I get here? Hmm…

The boy tried to recall how he got to this “Pak”.

He tries.

And tries.

And tries. Until he realizes, that he couldn’t remember anything at all. He can’t recall anything before waking up. His mind is a total blank.

Atma: Huh. All I remember is that pretty woman’s voice. I wonder who is she? I want to see her face…She says I’m Atma. And I’m her…son? Huh?

Just then, he notices his current attire. Which is a dull grey full bodysuit covering his entire body from neck to toe. Around his waist is a dark grey belt, with a slot to insert something. Along with a holster on his side. But the most interesting of all is a dull grey diamond shaped crystal, embedded right in his chest, as a part of his body.

Atma’s reaction to this is,

Atma: Eugh! What the heck?! I look…I look…I look so uncool! Euw!

Clearly, this kid has his priorities straight. Unfortunately, he was too busy fussing over his attire that he didn’t notice a cat right next to him.

Until he stepped on it.

Cat: MROW!!!

Atma: GWAH?! Oh, sorry! I didn’t see-

The cat didn’t wait for his apology. It just run away from Atma.

Atma: Wait, I’m sorry! Come back…whatever you are!

Elsewhere, a girl adjusted something on her watch, before aiming at the ground. The girl wears an inner hijab, while wearing a black and red hoodie which covers almost her entire body. She also wears black and red gloves alongside red shoes. But what’s most interesting about her is the scar on her right eye.

Her index finger pressed something on her glove.

Click!

Her watch fires a small grey ball. Once the object touched the ground, it releases colourless, slippery liquid, that’s almost invisible. Almost unnoticeable.

Young girl: (thoughts) Good. It works. Now I need to test whether it’s actually slippery.

?: Hah! This place is perfect!

Young girl: (thoughts) Scrap!

The young girl immediately hid herself behind some nearby trees, as a group of rowdy teenagers walk by. But not just any teenagers. These are ferocious looking teenage gangsters with scars and tattoos. Each of them at least wore a white skull tattoo on their shoulder. However, one of the gangsters has an extra “X” mark over his tattoo, and seems to be the leader of this gang. Thankfully, none of them notices her.

Gangster boss: No annoying adults around! This will be Skull Gang’s new territory. With no busybodies around, we can do whatever we want! Hahahah!

His goons laughed as well, while the girl groans in frustration.

Young girl: (thoughts) Tch! Just when I found a private training spot. I better get out of here fas-

Atma: Don’t run!

Young girl: !?

A cat ran past her hiding spot, much to her astonishment. Before being followed by a panting Atma.

Arma: Come…*pant* back-

Suddenly, Atma notices the girl hiding nearby, much to his surprise. As the girl stares back at Atma, one thought appears on Atma’s mind.

Atma (thoughts) Whoah…She looks super cool!

Unfortunately, because Atma is too busy admiring how cool the girl looks and the fact the liquid is almost invisible, Atma slipped on the slippery liquid.

Atma: Whoa whoa whoa-Ouw!

Crash!

If this is an anime, Atma would have swirls in his eyes as he face planted on the ground, with stars spinning on top of his head.

Atma: Ouw…

Struggling, Atma tried to get up,

STOMP!

When the Gangster Boss stomps on his back.

Atma: Ouw!

Gangster Boss: Now who do we have here, barging into my territory.

Atma: What the heck?! Let go of me! That hurts!

The gangster boss responded by stepping on Atma’s back much harder.

Atma: Ouw, ouw, ouw!

Gangster Boss: Nobody orders me around, brat! Not in my territory.

Atma: Territory? What the heck is that?

The gangster boss stepped harder.

Atma: Ouw! Knock it off already!

Gangster Boss: You dare make fun of me, huh?! You lot, teach this brat a lesson!

The other gangsters laughed sadistically as they approach Atma menacingly. As Atma struggle to free himself,

Smack!

One of the goons kick him in his side. Much to Atma’s shock, confusion, and pain.

Atma: OUW! What did you do tha-

Smack!

Another goon kicks him in the side as well. The gangsters laugh cruelly at Atma’s misfortune, while Atma suffer in pain.

Atma: Ouw…

Gangster Goon 3: Hah! My turn!

Atma: Stop…ouw…it hurts…

Atma look in horror as the goon lifted his leg, ready to stomp Atma in the head…

Splat!

When something hit the goon, right in the eye.

Gangster Goon 3: Argh! My eyes! It burns!

Splat!

Before the same thing hit the boss in the eye as well. Which seems to be…sambal?

Gangster Boss: Argh! My eye, my eye! Who dares attack me?!

Gangster Goon 5: That one, boss!

Atma glances at where the goon is pointing, and saw,

Atma: Cool girl…?

Cool girl glares at the gangsters as she took a fighting stance. While gesturing for them to come closer to here.

Not that the boss could see that, as he’s struggling to open his eyes.

Gangster Boss: Ergh! What are you waiting for?! Beat whoever that is!

Gangster Goons: R-right, boss!

Atma watched in horror, as the gangster goons charged at Cool girl, who just stood still.

Atma: Ergh…Watch out, cool gi-!

Slip

Atma: Eh?

Suddenly, for some reason, the goons slip on something, causing them to lose their balance and disrupting their movements.

Giving the girl a good chance to get in close and strike the goons in the neck, immediately knocking them out.

To say Atma is amazed is an understatement.

Atma: Woah…

But there are goons who are still standing up, and tries to attack her. One goes for a punch,

Gangster Goon 4: Hiyargh!

Which Cool girl effortlessly evaded, before getting in close and delivered a strong elbow strike to the goon’s chest. Knocking him out.

Gangster Goon 2: Uwargh!

Another goon went for a flying kick, which Cool girl responds by catching the goon by the leg, before tripping his other leg. Causing the goon to fall on his back, giving the girl a chance to stomp the goon in the crotch.

To say it is painful is an understatement, as evident by the girlish screams from that goon, before he comically passes out.

Atma: Hmm? Is it really that painful?

Cool girl: (thoughts)Hmm. It looks like my fighting skills hasn’t gone rusty…

Atma: Watch out, cool girl!

Suddenly, one goon leap into the air while swinging a metal pipe at her. Trying to bash her head in.

Gangster Goon 1: Take this, you brat!

Which Cool girl leaps out of the way. Evading the swing. But the goon wasn’t finished as it tries to go for another swing.

But the girl’s not giving that goon a chance.

Quickly, the girl aims her watch at the goon’s neck as she presses something on her glove with her middle finger.

BZZT!

Gangster Goon 1: Erk-!

Suddenly, the Goon stop in his tracks, as if he is shocked by an electric surge, before crumpling to the ground. Like a lifeless doll.

Gangster Boss: W-w-what?! What did you do, brat?!

Atma: I don’t know, but I bet it’s super cool!

Gangster Boss tremble in fear, as he realizes he’s the only one left standing. Leaving him all alone as the girl approaches him. Menacingly, despite the clear difference in age and size.

There’s only one thing he could do right now.

Gangster Boss: Kyaa!

Run away and scream like a little girl.

Atma: Heh! That’s right, run away you jerk!

Cool girl: How are you feeling right now?

Atma: Oh, cool girl! I’m feeling okay now.

Cool girl: Cool…girl?

Atma: Yeah! You are super cool, beating up those jerks! Thanks a lot, cool girl! If you didn’t beat up these jerks, I…I…I have no idea what’s gonna happen, but I bet it’s gonna hurt a lot. So really, thanks!

Cool girl: If you really want to thank me, you can start by explaining about yourself. Like what’s with the crystal on your chest?

Atma: Oh, this thing? I dunno. I woke up and I already have this thing. Looks so not cool…

Cool girl: …Excuse me?

Atma: I said I don’t know what this thing is. Or maybe I do, but I forgot. I mean, I can’t really remember anything. All I remember is,

Atma recaps what he remembered from the moment he wakes up, up until he met the girl.

Atma: As I was chasing that cute thing, I saw you. You look so co-

Cool girl: How do I know you’re not lying?

Atma: What?

Cool girl: How do I know you didn’t make all of this up? How do I know you really lose your memories?

Atma: Hmm…I don’t know? But I’m not lying. I really can’t remember anyth-urk!

Suddenly, Atma slumps to the ground as he held his stomach in pain. Much to the girl’s shock.

Cool Girl: Hey, what’s wrong?! What’s with your stomach?

Cool girl: (thoughts) Scrap! Don’t tell me he’s got internal bleeding!...or maybe, this is a trick to lower my guard?!

She aimed her watch at Atma, ready to fire in case Atma tries something funn-

GRU~

Until she hears the sound of a hungry stomach.

Atma: Urgh…it…hurts…

Cool girl: (thoughts) …

…Hmm. He doesn’t seem to be faking it…a trip to Pak Majid’s food should to the jo-wait, why should I care about him? I don’t know who he is. He has no relation to me.

It’s not my problem.

It’s not my business.

It’s not my concern-

Cool Girl(much younger): Ibu, why are you cooking all these meals?

Girl’s mother: For the masjid’s charity event, of course. For the poor and unfortunate people.

Cool Girl(much younger): I know that, but why for them? Do you know those people? Are they your friends?

Girl’s mother: Whether I know them or not, is irrelevant, Zafira. What matter is, that they are less fortunate than we are. That they are hungrier than we are. That they suffering more than we do. It’s because we are more fortunate that we should be helping others, my cute daughter.

Cool girl: (thoughts)…And look where that got you, Ibu. Because of your altruism, you…you…you…

Atma: You, urgh, okay cool girl?

Cool girl: Hmm?

Cool girl was astonished. Not expecting concern from him.

Cool girl: …I’m not the one with an aching stomach.

Atma: I know, urgh, but are you okay? You seem…seem…how should I say this? You don’t seem okay?

The girl stares at Atma’s perplexing behaviour. He’s the one who just got beat up and suffering from a stomach ache, yet he’s asking if she’s okay? Either he’s just acting nice or….

Cool girl: …That’s none of your concern. What matters is that you need something to eat. Stand up.

Atma: Oh. Alright then.

Cool girl: Good. Now hold still.

The young girl took out a red kain sarung, before wrapping it around Atma’s chest, covering the crystal on his chest.

Cool girl: Don’t take this off. Don’t tell anyone else about your crystal. Don’t show anyone else unless I say so. Got it?

Atma: Got it, cool girl. No way I’m gonna take this cool thing off.

Cool girl: (thoughts) …That’s just kain sarung.

Cool girl: Follow me. I know a place where you can eat.

Atma: Really? Cool! Thanks, cool girl!

Cool girl: Stop it.

Atma: What?

Cool girl: Just call me Zafira.

Atma: No prob, Zafira. And you can call me Atma!

Zafira: *groan* I know.

Zafira: (thoughts) I’m only doing this because I want to know what’s the deal with the crystal on his chest. That’s all there is to it. Nothing else. Nothing more. Not because of some stupid altruism…

With Zafira leading the way, the two of them exited the abandoned park and entered a district. Who look like it had seen better days.

Atma: Ergh…

Not that Atma realized that, as his stomach ache grew stronger.

Zafira: Here.

The girl entered a run-down restaurant named Pak Majid’s Food, with Atma behind her. A waiter greets them.

Male Waiter: Salam, Zafira-Oh, what’s with your friend?

Atma: Hun…gry…

Zafira: Whip up something quick for him please. Anything would do.

Male Waiter: Alright then, what about you?

Zafira: Nothing. He’s the only one eating today.

Male Waiter: If you say so.

The two of them sat at a table. Or rather, Zafira sat. Atma slumps into his chair.

Atma: Ergh…so hungry…

Zafira: Patience.

Atma: Fine…

Zafira: Hold still.

Zafira ordered as she took out her handphone, and took a picture of Atma’s face.

Atma: What are…ergh…you doing?

Zafira: None of your concern.

Atma: Fine…

As Atma slumped on the table, waiting for his food, Zafira searches Atma’s name and face on the Internet.

And found no match.

Zafira: (thoughts) Huh?

Refresh search

No match.

Refresh search.

No match.

Zafira: …You sure your name is Atma?

Atma: Yes…urgh…hungry…

Male Waiter: Here’s a Nasi Lemak, adik.

Atma: Finally…thanks…

Zafira: (thoughts)Hmm…even if his name isn’t Atma, I’d expect at least one profile to appear that match his face…could it be, he’s not registered? Maybe an illegal immigrant?! But his Bahasa Melayu is decently fluent.

NYOM!

What happen next made Zafira’s eyes grew comically wide, it almost fell out of her sockets.

Because Atma finish one plate of food in one bite.

Atma: SO YUMMY!!!

Zafira: …You finished a whole plate. In one go.

Atma: Yeah!

Zafira: …How.

The male waiter chuckle in amusement.

Male Waiter: Adik, you eat what’s on the plate. Not the plate.

Atma: Oh, really?

Complying, Atma put down his plate before he could take a bite out of it.

Zafira continues to stare with bewilderment as Atma’s antics.

Male Waiter: Hahahah! It’s rare to see a Malay kid enjoying rice nowadays.

Female Waiter: There’s more where that came from, adik.

Another waiter, a female, placed two plates of steaming food on their table. Much to Atma’s delight, and Zafira’s suspicion.

Zafira: I only ordered one meal.

Female Waiter: A secret admirer decided to treat you two.

Atma: Thanks secret admirer! Whoever you are!

Just as he is about to feast on his second meal, Zafira swipes his plate away.

Atma: Huh? What are you doing, Zafira?

Zafira: You don’t find this suspicious?

Atma: Suspi…what?

Zafira: Urgh, I mean, don’t you think this is weird?

Atma: What’s weird?

Male Waiter: Yeah, Zafira. It’s just someone treating you to food.

Female Waiter: It’s rude to refuse someone’s gift, you know. Refusing rezeki.

Atma: Yeah, what she said.

Zafira: …Tch! Fine. Here.

Atma: Nice!

Atma open his mouth wide, ready to eat a whole plate of food again. Before Zafira swipes the plate away.

Atma: Hey!

Zafira: Learn some manners first.

Atma: Who’s manners?

Female Waiter: Hahahah! Your friend sure is a funny one.

Zafira just groaned.

One lesson about manners later…a long, long, long lesson…

Atma: Mmm! So yummy!

Zafira: (thoughts) No wonder parents get so stressed…

Atma: Hmm? Zafira, your food’s over there.

Zafira: I know.

Atma: So why aren’t you eating it?

Zafira: I’m not hungry.

Atma: Really? But the food’s so yummy!

Zafira: Don’t make me repeat myself.

Atma: Alright. But seriously, the food is yummy. Thanks a lot, Zafira for bringing me to this cool place.

Zafira: Don’t mention it.

Atma: And for saving me from those jerks.

Zafira: You already said that.

Atma: Well, I’m saying it again. Thanks, Zafira. You’re super cool! Love ya!

As soon he said those words, suddenly, his clothes transformed. Gone are the dull faded grey colours. What replaces it are the colours crimson red and sky blue. Even his belt became half red and half blue. But what’s most interesting is his chest crystal which glows red and blue, causing the sarong to loosen somehow, before Atma’s crystal turns into a half blue and half red crystal.

To say Zafira was surprised is an understatement. And she’s not the only one. Everyone in the restaurant stared at Atma in shock. While Atma,

Atma: Oh. My. God.  SO COOL!

His eyes sparkle with glee, not at all perturbed or disturbed by what is currently happening.

Zafira: H…how did you change your clothes like that?

Female Waiter: And what’s with your…chest, adik?

Atma: No idea, but it’s look so cool!

He pointed at the red portion of his attire.

Atma: Look at this! It looks just like yours, Zafira!

Zafira: I can see that…

Female Waiter: Adik, your watch!

Zafira: !

Zafira glanced at her watch. And gasped in shock as her watch suddenly has a glowing crystal embedded to it, similar to Atma’s, except in red and black.

Atma: Woah, didn’t know you had that as well?! Cool!

Zafira: I don’t…

Zafira: (thoughts) How…what…why…

Atma: Sooo cool! We both…we both…we both…err…

Female Waiter: Match?

Atma: Yeah! That’s it. We match! So awesome! Can this day get any better?

Boom!

Atma: Gwah!

Suddenly, a loud noise from outside caught everyone by surprise. Especially Atma who fall from his chair. Upside down.

Atma: Ouw…

Zafira: You okay?! (thoughts) What was that noise?

Atma: I’m okay. What’s that sound?

Zafira: How should I know!?

Zafira growled, before realising her mistake.

Zafira: Sorry. Didn’t mean to yel-Oi! Where are you going?

Atma: I want to see what the heck that is!

Atma’s not the only one as everyone else in the restaurant headed outside to satisfy their curiosity. Which is then followed by a reluctant Zafira.

Zafira: (thoughts) Damn you…

But once everyone steps outside, the sight they saw immediately took their breath away. But not in a good way.

Because right now, a grey humanoid reptilian monster wielding a large hammer, is wrecking the town.

Hammer Monster: Hahahah!

The monster maniacally lifted it’s hammer high, before slamming it down on the ground, releasing a shockwave. Smashing up the street even more.

Zafira: (thoughts) What. The. Heck. A monster. A monster. A real life monster?! How?!

For the first time in a while, her body shake in shock, fear, and horror. A feeling shared by the other onlookers.

Zafira: (thoughts) This isn’t a dream. This isn’t a cartoon. This is-

Atma: So cool!

Everyone else glares at an oblivious Atma, who’s eyes sparkle at the sight of that monster. While Zafira comically faceplanted to the floor, anime style.

Zafira: (thoughts) Seriously?!

Blam! Blam! Blam!

Several shots hit the monster, as it came from several policemen pointing their guns at the monster.

Policemen: Surrender! This is your final warning!

Unfortunately, their shots barely scratch the monster.

Zafira: (thoughts)Their guns didn’t work?!

Hammer Monster: Heh! Is that all you cops got?! Weak! Let me show what true strength is! Hiyargh!

Boom!

With a Hammer swing, the monster launched a shockwave at the stunned police, who couldn’t dodge in time.

Argh!

Ergh!

Urgh!

Atma: Oh My God! Are they okay?!

Atma gasp in horror at the sprawled, unconscious bodies of the police. A sentiment shared with nearly everyone who was watching. Some onlookers already fainting in shock.

Zafira: They seem fine to me.

Atma: Really?

Zafira: Of course not!

Atma: I take it back. That jerk is not cool at all!

Zafira: (sarcastically)Oh really? What gave that away?

Hammer Monster: Hah! That ghost motorcycle was right! You cops can’t do anything against me! None of you cops can get in my way again. I can do anything I want! Ahahahah!

The monster lifted it’s hammer once again, going for another shockwave. Aiming for the unconscious policemen. Much to Atma’s horror.

Which triggered something inside him.

Atma: Stop!

Fwoosh!

One moment he was beside Zafira. Next, Atma was leaping through the air, before punching the monster in the face.

The crowd gasped in confusion, surprise and amazement. Especially Zafira.

Zafira: (thoughts) Did he just…?! How did he move so fast? And what’s that “Fwoosh” sound?

Hammer Monster: Argh!

Atma: Knock it off! You’re hurting them!

Hammer Monster: HOW DARE YOU BRA-oh. Oh. It’s you!

Atma: Yeah, it’s me!…what about it?

Hammer Monster: You’re that brat from earlier!

Atma: …Do I know you?

Zafira: (thoughts) Earlier? What is that freak talking about…wait.

Hammer Monster: Finally…I get to finish you off! Hiyargh!

The monster swing at Atma,

Fwoosh!

Who narrowly evaded.

Atma: Hey! I said knock it off!

Hammer Monster: Huwargh!

The monster launches a shockwave at Atma,

Fwoosh!

Which Atma dodged by leaping out of the way.

Zafira: (thoughts) That sound…it sounds like a jet thruster…

Hammer Monster: What are you?! How are you moving that fast?

Atma: I…have no idea, really. How do I move this fast?...But even if I know, what makes you think I will tell you, you jerk! Take this!

Fwoosh!

Atma leaped through the air, ready to deliver another punch.

When suddenly,

Bam.

Zafira: Huh?

Atma: Ouw!

For some reason, Atma stop in his tracks as he clutches his back, seemingly in pain.

Atma: Ouw, what the?

Zafira: Atma, watch out!

Smash!

Atma: Woah!

Barely, just barely, Atma dodges the hammer swing by boosting sideways. But unfortunately, he wasn’t looking where he was going, and accidently step on some debris caused by the monster’s attacks.

Atma: Whoa!

Atma struggles as he tries to regain his balance and not falling on the asphalt. But unfortunately, this distracted him from noticing the monster’s next swing.

Zafira: Watch out!

Until it was too late.

Boom!

The direct shockwave sent the boy flying, before landing on the tarmac and groaning in pain.

Atma: ARGH!! Sakitnya!!! Ergh…

The force of the hammer is so strong, it didn’t just tear through his attire, it actually tore through Atma’s skin, revealing something that shock everyone even more.

Machine parts and wires. Like that of a machine.

Atma: Ouw…

Zafira: Atma…you’re…a robot?

Blue liquid drips from Atma’s gaping wound, as Atma’s struggle in pain. While the monster mocks him.

Hammer Monster: Hah! So you’re a freak! That explains everything. Oh, but don’t worry freak. I’ll show you where you belong. In the trash!

The monster cackled as it lifted it’s hammer, ready to deliver another shockwave towards Atma…

Before a bolt arrow struck the monster in the chest.

BZZT!

Hammer Monster: Erk!

Courtesy of Zafira, aiming her watch at the monster. Or more accurately, a watch which has somehow transformed into a crossbow.

Zafira: (thoughts) To think I would use this Crossbow Mode for someone I literally just meet…

Despite his intense pain, Atma’s eyes sparkle in amazement at Zafira’s weapon.

Atma: Whoah…you…ergh…so cool…ouw…

Zafira: Stop talking.

As the monster writhe in pain, struggling with paralysis, Zafira pulled back her bow, generating a new bolt arrow.

Bam.

When her crossbow suddenly reverts back into a watch. Much to her shock and confusion.

Zafira: Huh?!

Zafira press on her watch, trying to transform it into a crossbow. But her watch remains as a watch. It’s as if her watch’s transforming mechanism is broken.

Zafira: Scrap!

Atma: Zafira? Ergh…is…everything okay?

Hammer Monster: Ergh…

What’s worse, the monster’s paralysis has worn off. Leaving Zafira defenceless against the ferocious and enraged monster.

Hammer Monster: You…you brats! I…I’ll kill you both! Rragh!

Zafira stare in horror and fear as the monster launches another shockwave, aiming at her this time. If Zafira was thinking more clearly, she would have quickly gotten out of the way.

But she wasn’t calm. She wasn’t thinking clearly. For the first time ever, she was panicking. She was scared. She was terrified.

Atma: Zafira!

As Zafira watch in horror as the shockwave is approaching her at an alarming speed…

JET RUHA SLASH

Suddenly, a dark purple energy slash intercepted the shockwave. Protecting Zafira.

Zafira: (thoughts) …Huh?

Hammer Monster: Hah?!

Zafira: Atma…?

Zafira stared in disbelief at her saviour, the one who perform the dark energy slash, Atma. Who’s appearance has suddenly changed, again. But this time, looking rather ominous.

Gone are his red and blue colours, replace by ominous dark purple. Even his crystal glows an ominous purple. On his dark purple belt, a card occupies one of the slots. To top it all off, an ominous purple aura is surrounding Atma. As he wields two, never before seen, dark purple glowing blade on his wrists. Which seems to be shaped like a jet wings.

And Atma’s expression?

Cold, calculated, harsh. His expression is almost unrecognizable. He looks like a different person.

Atma: Hah…hah…hah…

Despite his gaping wound, Atma keeps glaring at the monster, who flinch in response. Before responding,

Hammer Monster: Huh! Y-you think a costume change is going to defeat me, brat?! Rragh!

Once again, the monster lifted his hammer, ready for another swing.

But Atma was ready. As he aimed his one of blades at the monster,

JET RUHA SHOT

Before firing a dark purple energy shot at the monster. Hitting the monster in the face.

Hammer Monster: Argh!

As the monster writhe in pain, Atma rush towards the monster, getting close to it. However, the monster has recovered, and in rage, swing at Atma at close range!

Zafira: Atma!

Atma’s response is to block the handle of the hammer with his jet blade before, with the boost from his internal thrusters,  delivers a,

JET RUHA PUNCH

To the Monster’s stomach, knocking the wind out of the monster.

Hammer Monster: Urk! Grr…

The Monster tries to swing again, which Atma block and counter with a,

JET RUHA PUNCH

Once again.

Zafira: (thoughts) …Huh. So he does know how to fight…

Groaning in immense pain and frustration, the monster tries swinging at Atma from the side. Which Atma evade by ducking before one of jet blades attach to his leg.

Before he then performs a sweeping motion at the monster’s legs. Tripping up the monster and causing it to drop it’s hammer on the ground.

JET RUHA SWEEP

Zafira observed the monster’s condition with deep interest. Particularly, at how the monster’s legs began to bleed. Bleeding red blood.

Zafira: (thoughts) So this freak can bleed…interesting…

The monster groans as it tries to get up.

JET RUHA STOMP

Hammer Monster: Argh!

But Atma’s bladed foot on the monster’s back put a stop to that. Struggling in immense pain against Atma’s sharp foot, the monster tries to grab it’s hammer.

Blam! Blam! Blam!

Which Atma responds by shooting the hammer far away from the monster. With his leg pinning the monster, and the hammer far away, the monster is helpless.

Zafira: (thoughts) Hmm?

Just then, Zafira notices something else about Atma. Particularly, his healing wound.

Bit by bit, Atma’s flesh are growing back, closing his gaping wound. And Atma seem to be getting…less tired. He doesn’t seem to be worn out, despite using a lot of energy.

Zafira: (thoughts) …And I thought this day couldn’t get any weirder.

SP BAR FULL. ABILITY READY

Zafira: Eh?

Suddenly, Atma took out a card from his belt holster. A dark purple card, with black volt patterns all over. Glaring at the weakened monster, Atma inserts the card into a slot in his belt.

ABILITY: VOLT

Before a black volt aura surrounds Atma, and changes Atma attire. It’s still dark purple, but it now has the additions of black volt patterns, much to Zafira’s astonishment.

Zafira: (thoughts) …Huh.

Then, his leg jet blade detaches from his leg, before combining with his other jet blade. Forming a new weapon, a single sword shaped like a jet

Holding his jet sword in both of his hands, Atma plunge his sword into the monster’s back, delivering a big surge of voltage energy towards the monster.

FINISHER: VOLT SURGE

To say the monster is in agony is an understatement. The monster screams in pain, but only for a while, as it quickly passed out. No longer able to move, react and fight. With a bruised, battered, and beaten body.

The monster is finally defeated. Thanks to Atma.

Just then, the monster suddenly reverts back to a human form. A human Zafira is familiar with. The gangster’s leader who bullied Atma earlier.

Zafira: (thoughts) Hmph. Knew it. Good riddance. Although being dead would be preferable…

Though faint, Zafira could see that the ex-monster is still breathing. Albeit barely.

MATERIALIZING…WAVE

Zafira: Hmm?

Suddenly, a card materialized in mid-air in front of Atma, before forming into a card.

WAVE WEAPON

Without any words, Atma grabs the card before placing it into his holster.

Zafira: (thoughts) Hmm? So he gains the ability of the freak he defeated?

FINISHER ACTIVE

Suddenly, Atma click a button on his belt. Before holding his sword high in the air. Despite the fact his foe has been defeated.

Zafira: (thoughts) What is he doing? He looks like he’s going to cut…oh. Oh. Oh.

Upon realization, for the first time since ever, Zafira smile. But not a kind smile. A sinister, sadistic, malicious smirk.

Zafira: (thoughts) Heh. You continue to exceed my expectations, Atma. And I use to think you were just a naïve, weak kid.

Dark electricity sparks gather in his blade as Atma prepares for a deadly slash, Ready to end his foes’ life, once and for all.

FINISHER: VOLT SLA-

Teenage Girl: That’s enough!

Suddenly, a teenage girl in a hijab interrupts Atma. A rather tall teenager, with a beautiful face, and an elegant yet stern voice. Her attire consists of a black uniform with violet highlights which resembles a military uniform, complete with a military cap.

And Zafira knew this teenager very well. Much to her displeasure.

Zafira: (thoughts) Violet?! What is she doing here?!

Violet: Your foe is already defeated, kid. You can stop now.

Zafira: Don’t stop, Atma! Finish off that freak!

Violet: Zafira!

Zafira: Screw off, Miss Violet! This isn’t your business!

Violet: I’m not letting your friend take a life, sister.

Zafira: You’re not my sister! Just because my father married your mother doesn’t mean we’re related! So, don’t step in where you don’t belon-

Violet: Kid! What’s wrong?!

Zafira’s rant is interrupted as she too starts to notice something odd about Atma. His aura and attire starts to flicker, as he clutches his head, seemingly in pain.

Zafira: Atma?!

Despite his apparent pain, he remains silent as he continues to clutch his head. Suddenly, his attire reverts back to his sky blue and red attire. Like the one back in the restaurant. The aura surrounding his body disappears, along with his jet sword. Even his crystal stop glowing and becomes a faded red and blue colour, as Atma’s eyes close shut, before his body fell. Heading to the ground.

Zafira: Atma!

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Unbeknownst to anyone, a mysterious figure has been observing everything that has happened from on top of a building, hidden from sight. This mysterious girl wore an attire of red and yellow, while wearing a red mask with flame designs. To put in simple, her attire seems to be fire theme. In her hand, is a red and yellow sniper rifle. The mysterious girl smirks.

Mysterious Girl: Well, well, well, so this is where you ended up, V1T-100. And your RUHA Magic is still working. Finally, things are getting interesting again.

The sniper rifle in her hand dissipated before the girl took out a phone. She aims at a spot before pressing an app. Causing the phone to fire a beam of light at that spot, which materializes a portal.

Mysterious girl: I can’t wait…it’s gonna be so much fun~

The girl giggle maliciously as she walks into the portal. Before the portal disappears, leaving no trace of anyone or anything there on the roof.

 

Hakimblue99 Productions presents:

 

LIMIT BREAK: Tales of Atma the Hybrid Hero

 

Episode 1: Bizarre Meeting, Bizarre Day

 

 

Major Blog Update

 *Blows dust* Wow. How time flies. I almost forgot I even had this blog in the first place. When I look at my years old posts...I feel cringe. To any new(or somehow returning) readers, please, please, please do not read my old posts. They don't age well...

Regardless, I'm not here to reminisce about the past. I'm here to tell anyone who cares to read this post about my new original story. Yes, I'm writing an original story. This is my first original story that I publish online for free.

"Why should I care about your story?" You might ask. Well, for starters, it's a superhero story. Superhero stories are always cool...to me, at least.

"But there's tons of superhero stories out there. What makes yours special?" Well, for one, it has an amnesiac protagoni-

"Boo! Amnesia! Cliche!" Hey, hey, hey! Don't go away yet. I...agree that amnesia is a bit cliche. But there's more to this story, I assure you. 

For one, this isn't just a superhero story. It also has;

A bit of Magic!

Tons of drama!

Inspiration and references from other superhero stories!

Bizarreness galore! Like, trust me, it will get much, much more bizarre later on.

But a story is incomplete without it's characters. So let me give a rundown on this story's protagonists.

Yes, protagonists. Because this story has dual protagonist.

The first one is the amnesiac protagonist like I just mentioned. Atma. Despite his amnesia, he has a heart of gold. Always willing to help people and protecting others than dastard villains.

Atma has a major flaw though. Well, several in fact. 

He's naive, reckless and dumb. 

Which is why Atma balanced by the other protagonist. Zafira. A girl with a scarred face, she doesn't fight on the frontlines for now. Instead, she supports Atma behind the scenes with her sharp intellect, strategical mind and inventive talents. 

Unlike the cheerful Atma though, she's more serious.

Cold.

Serious.

And has dubious morals...

If all my babbling has interested you, you could read my story at any of these links.

https://www.rebornevo.com/forums/topic/63267-limit-break-tales-of-atma-the-hybrid-hero/#comment-987125

https://www.fictionpress.com/s/3364648/1/Limit-Break-Tales-of-Atma-the-Hybrid-Hero

Or just wait for me to publish on this blog.

In fact, I plan to share more details about my stories on this blog. Like the behind-the-scenes of my story, the references in my stories, and much more!

With that, I formally announced the revival of my blog, asianyangkreatif! Goodbye, and see you again sooner!


30 April 2017

My top 5 Ejen Ali characters

It’s has been a year already and Ejen Ali has run a full season, consisting of 13 episodes. Among these episodes, a number of characters had been introduced. Because this show is undoubtedly awesome, it stands to say that some of these characters are awesome. Today, I will be counting down:

My Top 5 Ejen Ali Characters

Usual reminder!

-This list includes charcters from the Ejen Ali franchise only. Duh.

-Ejen Ali and it’s characters are property of Wau animation. I don’t own anything.

-This is based on my personal opinion. And interests.

With that, let’s get to the list!

5. Abang Bear
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In fiction where the story centers around the conflict between the good and evil, sometimes there are several types of villains. One of them is the evil businessman. For Ejen Ali, it’s Abang Bear. And the show made it pretty obvious by giving him a ‘tauke’ look, because everyone(in Malaysia) knows that ‘tauke’s are usually associated with businesses and wealth and stuff. No offense to real-life ‘tauke’s.

The evil businessman villain are one of my favourite types of villains. Why? You see, evil businessman villains are known to be cunning and smart. These two qualities enable these villains to operate their dirty business secretly without getting noticed by the authorities-or if the authorities did notice, there’s no proof to apprehend them. Because they are just that cunning. It also poses a trouble for the heroes when they are trying to apprehend these villains. Because they are so cunning, they always get away from the heroes grasps, even when the opportunities is in front of the heroes eyes. Not to mention, how can you run a successful business if you’re not smart?

Not to mention, evil businessman villains can be quite heartless sometimes. Because they usually don’t care about anyone else and only care about themselves-and their pockets. They don’t care who get hurts, as long as money keep flowing into their pockets. And we could see this quality with Abang Bear. He tortures cats for goodness sake. How could he.

Because I like evil businessman villains and Abang Bear is the spitting image of it, it’s only fair I put on my list. But, since he doesn’t really do much(for now), I’m placing him at the bottom. Hopefully, we got to see more of him in action is season 2.

Also, can someone explain to me what ethnicity he is? Chinese? Malayan(Kedah)? Mixed? Venezuela? Antartican? I can’t really tell from his accent. It’s pretty nice, tho…

4. Dr. Aaron
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Dr. Aaron? Who you ask? You know, that guy who worked under Dr. Tong? That guy who thinks that he is the saviour of the ‘human species’ and it is his duty to progress the human race?

You know that guy who appeared in episode 2? The mad scientist type villain?

Yup, he’s the one.

Ever since he appeared in introduction episode, he became my favourite villain. In a matter of seconds. Why do you ask? One word. Motive.

In fiction, a good character must have one of these characteristics. Motive.  And Dr. Aaron fits the bill.

From the very first episode the writers revealed Dr. Aaron motives. Straight upfront.  He wants to progress the human ‘species’. To bring them to an age of prosperity and harmony. Sort of. I guess. That doesn’t sound like anything evil, right? So why is he a villain?

Well, good motives are good motives, but it’s the execution what matters. In order to achieve this noble dream of his, he went to…quite unethical measures. From the very early episode, we seen him trying his invention which he claims ‘could advance the human race’. And from the looks of it, it probably could! But there’s one problem; it robs human of their humanity. It controls humans minds and turns into mindless slaves. Unable to think, speak or have emotions. All they do is work, work, work. As they were instructed to. Like robots.

Well that got dark. Dang, this show is awesome!

When I think about this motive, I notice something. An opportunity. A golden opportunity, for Dr. Aaron's character development. How does Dr. Aaron thinks about stuff like human emotions and love? Does he consider them as obstacles for mankind’s development? If so, how will he handle 'remove' these ‘obstacles’? Does he really have the means of ‘bringing out the full potential of humankind’ as he claims, in his own  image?

I believe, if the show explore Dr. Aaron’s motives more deeply, it will give him significant and amazing character development, thus making him an awesome villain, which in turn makes him a major threat against CyberRaya and possibility, humanity itself.

Heh. Ironic.

But since he’s probably in custody right now, he really couldn’t do much for now. Which is why he is not on the number one spot.

3. Dos

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One word: HOT. Full stop.

...



Okay, she’s one of Uno’s main man. Or woman, in her case.

Who is super hot.

She and her partner plays an important role in Uno’s scheme to take over MATA. Such as stealing IRIS’s blueprint, recruit Dr. Aaron into their faction and much more.

How hot is that?

Being introduced into the series from the very start, she proved to be a formidable and challenging foe for Ali and his companions.

While still looking hot.

Besides being very agile and flexible, she is equipped with an array of weapons. From booster shoes to energy blades. But her signature weapon is her 2 shox stix, which she wears as a hairpin. She uses them by throwing them at her enemies to stun them with an electric attack, thus immobilizing them.

Wow, I know she’s hot, but I didn’t know she could be quite ‘stunning’.

But the best thing about her is her suit. As the norm with female spy in fiction, she wore a full body suit which mainly consists of black. But unlike other female spies, her suit is actually pretty modest. No exposed, err, chest, no skin-tight suit that exposed her, well, stuff or anything that’s got to do with it. Finally! A modest looking female spy.

But, despite being modest, she still looks…you guess it. HOT.


...


I need to see a doctor.

2. Rizwan
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Ah, that famous Inviso agent. That handsome looking dude in the white suit. The skilled infiltrator who always walks around with that lollipop.

When he made his debut in episode 2, I thought he will be that jerk-ish, arrogant handsome dude who will constantly harass Ali throughout the show. But, in the very same episode, my views changed. From spite to awe and admiration. Words aren’t enough to describe how cool and amazing Rizwan’s fighting skills. You just have to watch it for yourself. Seriously, he knows the position of the human body’s pressure points. Phwoarr….

Rizwan doesn’t really like Ali, but for a good reason. Unlike Alicia who’s a plain jerk. He believes that Ali will be an obstacle for future MATA’s operations and get in the way of the mission…and he’s kinda right. Any Ejen Ali fan can approve this. But unlike Alicia, Rizwan decides to something with Ali so he would no longer be a burden for MATA. What does he do? He becames his…jeng jeng jeng…Ali’s mentor!

Thanks to his strict and stern(but necessary) mentoring, Ali became the amazing agent and the less annoying brat as recently in the series. His relationship with Ali became quite close. In fact, I think he’s one of the few people who are supportive of Ali. Kudos to you, Rizwan!

Oh! Had I mentioned that it’s later revealed that he wasn’t always the cold person he was now? He actually used to be(apparently) more cheerful but that all changed after the Leader of the Inviso Core died in the explosion…who was actually his beloved mentor. Whom he considered like a father. Ohhh…how sad.

But luckily, his mentor did survived the incident. And he…wants to take over MATA? What?! He turned traitor? What?!!And he even tries to kill his protégé? What?!!!

Hmm…I wonder. After all this ordeal, I wonder how Rizwan will think of his mentor after this? I guess we just have to wait for season 2 to find out…

1   1.     Ali

Ali vs Dos


,     Yup, folks. You heard it right. It’s Ali. Ali bin Ghazali. Ali, the main character of the series.

     Ali has gone a long way since the very start of the series. At first, he’s the cliché ‘nobita boy’, being irresponsible, lazy, doesn’t follow orders, always slacking in studies, getting late to school, annoying and anything that goes with it. But as the series progress, his character develop significantly. In fact, I think he had the most character development in the series. He’s the main character after all.

From the annoying, cringe-inducing, lazy, hopeless brat to a less annoying, less cringe-inducing, less lazy, less hopeless brat and a more potent, capable, skilled, cool and an awesome kid, especially in his skills as an agent. He tooks his responsibility as an agent more seriously now, and trains as hard as he can in order to be the best spy agent. And his training did pay off, as recently in the series he was able to stand against powerful enemies such as Dos and Trez.

And he gotten really, really good with those Aero boots.

Not to mention, he also seems to be improving in his studies. He starts to arrive at school early and manages to answer his teacher’s questions in the class. Finally!

There’s actually a tragic tale behind Ali. You see, his mother is…dead. Well, she isn’t confirmed to be dead but for now, let’s presume that’s the case. While his dad is far too busy with his work to spend time with family. He’s one of the main contributors of CyberRaya, after all. So, this means Ali is lacking parental attention.

Oh. That’s probably the reason why Ali is lacking in his studies. Lack of attention and love from his parents. I start to feel sorry for him.

Oh, had I mentioned how caring and passionate Ali is? Yup, you heard that right. Ali actually cares about other people’s wellbeing. And it isn’t limited to humans only. It includes cats! Cute, cuddly little cats. When anyone is in trouble, Ali would do his best to help that person. When he sees people that cares gets hurt, he gets pissed off. In fact, it’s the reason why, in the season one finale, IRIS manages to take over Ali. And because of this, IRIS-controlled-Ali manages to beat the heck of out Uno’s faction. Take that, bad guys! That’s what you get for hurting Bakar.

Yeah, Ali might still make a blunder sometimes, but trust him, if things gets tough and requires Ali’s unique abilities, you can bet Ali will get the job done.

So, there’s my list of “My top 5 Ejen Ali characters”. Did I miss anyone? Got something you disagree with? Is my writing good or complete trash? Please let me know in the comments. And if you’re a fan of Ejen Ali(and Boboiboy) and want more goodies like this, please support my blog.


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